Business email English: what to stop writing

Indian business English inherited a set of phrases from an older, more formal register and kept them long after the rest of the English-speaking world dropped them. None of it makes you look uneducated — but with an international client it reads as dated, and a few items genuinely confuse.

The phrases worth retiring

Two deserve a note. "Revert" means to return to a previous state, not to reply — I will revert reads to an international colleague as a mistake rather than a formality. And "do the needful" is the one that causes actual harm: it moves the work of deciding what to do onto the reader. Naming the action is not blunter, it is more useful.

"Prepone" is different: it is a genuinely useful Indian English coinage that simply is not understood elsewhere. Keep it domestically; spell it out internationally.

The structural habit

Indian professional email often opens with context and arrives at the request last. International business email does the opposite: the request comes first, context after.

Instead of:

Respected Sir, With reference to the trailing mail regarding the Q3 report which we discussed in the meeting held on Tuesday, and as per our conversation, I would like to inform you that the same is pending from our side and hence kindly do the needful at the earliest.

Write:

Hi Anand,

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Could you send the Q3 figures by Thursday? We need them to finish the report we discussed on Tuesday.

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Thanks, Priya

The second is not less respectful. It is easier to act on, which is what a busy reader experiences as respect.

A four-line shape that works

1. Greeting. Hi [first name] is standard in most international business now. Dear [name] for formal first contact.
2. The ask, in the first sentence. What you want, and by when.
3. Context, briefly. Only what the reader needs to act.
4. Close. Thanks or Best regards, then your name.

Subject lines follow the same rule: Q3 figures — need by Thursday beats Regarding report.

Small things that signal fluency

• Contractions are normal in business email. I'll, we've, don't read as natural, not careless.
• One request per email. Two requests means one gets missed.
• Drop please find attached; I've attached the invoice is current.
• Let me know if you have questions is the standard close. Awaiting your revert is not.

How to practise this

Take five emails you have already sent and rewrite each one to put the request in the first sentence. That single exercise fixes most of it — the phrase list above is easy to look up, but the ordering habit is the part that has to be rebuilt.

For the spoken equivalent of this shift, see English job interview answers. Business communication is covered in the LangVR business skills courses.